Dark Angel

March 7, 2009
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A beautiful creature
Who i love
But i evil
A dark angel
A creature
That has stolen my heart
And will most likely rip it open
And feast apon it's insides
But i don't mind
Because it's still her
And it's my choice
To hand over my heart
To the
Dark Angel





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pinkvolleyballgirl said...
Mar. 31, 2009 at 11:54 pm
Wow this is kinda haunting, but completely captivating. The length of the poem leaves me wanting to read more about the mysterious dark angel. Are you a fan of twilight? Cause this completely reminds me of some of Stephanie Meyer's descriptions.
consider the phrase: "Will most likely rip it open" THe phrase kinda sticks out among the other imagery.
what about something like:
"and is destined to rip it apart"? It adds rhyming and flow.
Just a suggestion, keep up the go... (more »)
 
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