What I see

March 5, 2009
By Ryan Shene BRONZE, Oneida, New York
Ryan Shene BRONZE, Oneida, New York
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What they see, is a 'teenage relationship'
What I see, is a better relationship than most adults have.
They see two teenagers that don't know what they are doing
I see you, and I haven't ever felt this way before.
They see how much time we are together.
I see how much time I wish I was with you.
They see infatuation
I see my best friend whom I love.
They see two people that are completely different.
I see someone who I've gotten to know she is like me.
They see people that would say they 'think' we love each other.
I see us, as though God made us for each other.
They see teenagers that just say anything.
What I see when I look in your eyes, that beats words that could be said.
They cont up the months we are together.
I'm counting down the years, till I say 'I do.'


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Steven said...
on Jul. 21 2011 at 12:17 pm

wow! im in a boarding school were the staff go crazy if a guy hangs out with a girl to much... so its hard keeping relationships alive there.

i think this poem hits the spot. i give it a 5 star! really good


on Apr. 25 2010 at 2:18 pm
FreeTheWordZ BRONZE, Eutawville, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"success is not behind you its straight ahead, that tiny light that if you get closer it will get begger"

datz real nice...i like :~)

on Mar. 18 2009 at 4:50 am
mang9believe GOLD, Rigby, Idaho
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Favorite Quote:
“You were smitten with me. You were speechless to behold my beauty. You had never met anyone so fascinating. You thought of me every waking minute. You dreamed about me. You couldn’t stand it. You couldn’t let such wonderfulness out of your sight" SC

Aww thats so cute and special ;D ha its true too..




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