It's in your eyes

March 5, 2009
By Undiscovered PLATINUM, Trophy Club, Texas
Undiscovered PLATINUM, Trophy Club, Texas
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It's in your eyes

It's in your eyes
I can see
All your lies
Why risk it? I can see through you.

It's in your eyes.
Your mouth claims that you're fine.
I can see the tears that have dried.
Don't worry; tears are the mirror of bravery.

It's in your eyes
You say you don't care.
Even though you've tried
To break the lock on your man's heart.

It's in your eyes.
Every bit of it.
In your eyes.
The story of your life spread out at my fingertips.

Don't you believe me?
It's in your eyes.
Everything I see
That's how I know the twists and feathers of your soul.

It's in your eyes.
The window to the soul
Washed fresh with cries.
You scream for pity with a shallow breath.

Words are thoughtless breaths of air
that twist what's in you eyes
Everything is in your eyes.

The author's comments:
I have this weird "gift" of "reading" people's eyes. It's as easy as a book, depending on the peron. Please critique!

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breezer11 GOLD said...
on Jun. 5 2009 at 11:56 pm
breezer11 GOLD, Cinci, Ohio
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I really love this. Its so awesome! It's beutifully written, and so full of passion! I love this, its amazing!

on Mar. 18 2009 at 6:02 am
mang9believe GOLD, Rigby, Idaho
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Favorite Quote:
“You were smitten with me. You were speechless to behold my beauty. You had never met anyone so fascinating. You thought of me every waking minute. You dreamed about me. You couldn’t stand it. You couldn’t let such wonderfulness out of your sight" SC

Thats pretty amazing.


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