Stop! In the Name of Love

March 5, 2009
By Ciera Gentry BRONZE, Spartanburg, South Carolina
Ciera Gentry BRONZE, Spartanburg, South Carolina
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Stop! In the Name of Love

As you walk past him,
your heart races.

Your palms start to get all sweaty.

You think about him all the time.

Your mind is filled
With nothing but thoughts
of being the one by his side.

When he speaks to you,
You're at loss of words.

You can't even look at him in the eye,
because you're afraid of tripping and falling.
Now you watch him with someone else.

Leaving you with nothing but hopeless dreams.

As days go by, you think of him even more then you did before.
Your fear starts to evaporate,
and your true feelings come to the surface.
Caution! Caution!
Attention! Please!
Stop! Because you're In Love!!

The author's comments:
When writing this piece I thought of my first crush and how he made me feel everytime I saw him. In the end I told him how I felt. It turns out, he liked me too!

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on Aug. 27 2010 at 7:23 pm
 i like this i can actually feel the feelings you have you should try and add a little more imagery give it a little more:)


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