March 5, 2009
By Anonymous

the bats in the sky
the blood on my lips
the sweet taste
the irresistible smells
the pain in your neck
the red lipstick
the beautiful pale skin
the tower which I live in
the bliss of every kiss
the undead; my minions
the hypnotizing eyes
the stunning black hair
the striking model figure
the silky long dress
the full moon and stars
the hunters and their dogs
the fire in the night
the villagers all in fright
the frown on my face
the queen with no free space

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on Mar. 20 2009 at 10:50 pm
splatterpunk PLATINUM, Phoenix, Arizona
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vary interesting it is elegant, mystyrious, cold, dark, and yet it makes you feel like you are one your self. keep writing like this you can probably take it to a whole new level.

on Mar. 16 2009 at 4:21 pm
Beth Medlin BRONZE, Benton, Arkansas
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Great work! It's so beautiful


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