Romeo and Juliet

March 1, 2009
By mindymax GOLD, Armona, California
mindymax GOLD, Armona, California
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Favorite Quote:
"The whole world looked drunk, and I liked it that way." - Rebeca Godfrey, book title"The Torn skirt"


does he know how my heart flutters does she know how my knees buckle whenever she walks by

whenever he says hi


does he know how much I yearn for him when I see the sun set behind the land




does she know how I wish to give her a star to land softly in her hand





does she notice how the sun shines brighter whenever she smiles
does he notice how I wish for him to spread apon the velvet sky, in dazzling stars, streched for miles does she notice the tears I weep as I grasp her hand,so cold against my cheek


I reach for the vile,the one promised for death


no taste,nor burn,only the falling of my silhouette


knowing I'm leaving happily with my Juliet...



does he notice the tears I weep as my eyes see apon the ground
my love dead asleep


I lay my head on his chest hearing no flutter or beat


knowing now my Romeo is not asleep I reach my head twards him,thy lips still warm



I hear the foot steps of two,or three ,a swarm



quickly reaching for his dagger no hesitation,nor a breath,the stepps get louder





swinging foward to my chest





knowing now I shall be put to rest





the pain to much,my breath comes faster




I reach for his hand,I release a laughter




suddenly happy,we'll be together in the kingdom high


the darkness takes me ,and thus die


The author's comments:
I read Romeo and Juliet and fell in love with their tragic love,it's not corny or anything, it what true love wishes it could be.

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mindymax GOLD said...
on Jun. 24 2010 at 4:51 pm
mindymax GOLD, Armona, California
10 articles 0 photos 80 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The whole world looked drunk, and I liked it that way." - Rebeca Godfrey, book title"The Torn skirt"

thats cool, totalawesomeness!!

 


heroesfan1 said...
on May. 27 2010 at 7:58 pm
heroesfan1, Hanford, California
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Favorite Quote:
All our dreams can come true, if we have the courage to pursue them.
Walt Disney

Hey Mindy it is me Travis!!! I GOT AN ACCOUNT!!!!!! :) Nice Poem.

mindymax GOLD said...
on May. 26 2010 at 3:21 pm
mindymax GOLD, Armona, California
10 articles 0 photos 80 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The whole world looked drunk, and I liked it that way." - Rebeca Godfrey, book title"The Torn skirt"

I like the spaces... they make it dramatic.. Nice poem!!!]

------Travis-------


on Mar. 18 2009 at 8:05 pm
I love ur poem lil sis this reminds me of what i would want to feel when i fall in love, an dont pay attension to negative feedback!!!! love you!


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