Romeo and Juliet

does he know how my heart flutters does she know how my knees buckle whenever she walks by

whenever he says hi

does he know how much I yearn for him when I see the sun set behind the land

does she know how I wish to give her a star to land softly in her hand

does she notice how the sun shines brighter whenever she smiles
does he notice how I wish for him to spread apon the velvet sky, in dazzling stars, streched for miles does she notice the tears I weep as I grasp her hand,so cold against my cheek

I reach for the vile,the one promised for death

no taste,nor burn,only the falling of my silhouette

knowing I'm leaving happily with my Juliet...

does he notice the tears I weep as my eyes see apon the ground
my love dead asleep

I lay my head on his chest hearing no flutter or beat

knowing now my Romeo is not asleep I reach my head twards him,thy lips still warm

I hear the foot steps of two,or three ,a swarm

quickly reaching for his dagger no hesitation,nor a breath,the stepps get louder

swinging foward to my chest

knowing now I shall be put to rest

the pain to much,my breath comes faster

I reach for his hand,I release a laughter

suddenly happy,we'll be together in the kingdom high

the darkness takes me ,and thus die

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heroesfan1 said...
May 27, 2010 at 7:58 pm
Hey Mindy it is me Travis!!! I GOT AN ACCOUNT!!!!!! :) Nice Poem.
mindymax replied...
Jun. 24, 2010 at 4:51 pm

thats cool, totalawesomeness!!


mindymax said...
May 26, 2010 at 3:21 pm

I like the spaces... they make it dramatic.. Nice poem!!!]


christinerbeener said...
Mar. 18, 2009 at 8:05 pm
I love ur poem lil sis this reminds me of what i would want to feel when i fall in love, an dont pay attension to negative feedback!!!! love you!
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