Romeo and Juliet

March 1, 2009
does he know how my heart flutters does she know how my knees buckle whenever she walks by

whenever he says hi

does he know how much I yearn for him when I see the sun set behind the land

does she know how I wish to give her a star to land softly in her hand

does she notice how the sun shines brighter whenever she smiles
does he notice how I wish for him to spread apon the velvet sky, in dazzling stars, streched for miles does she notice the tears I weep as I grasp her hand,so cold against my cheek

I reach for the vile,the one promised for death

no taste,nor burn,only the falling of my silhouette

knowing I'm leaving happily with my Juliet...

does he notice the tears I weep as my eyes see apon the ground
my love dead asleep

I lay my head on his chest hearing no flutter or beat

knowing now my Romeo is not asleep I reach my head twards him,thy lips still warm

I hear the foot steps of two,or three ,a swarm

quickly reaching for his dagger no hesitation,nor a breath,the stepps get louder

swinging foward to my chest

knowing now I shall be put to rest

the pain to much,my breath comes faster

I reach for his hand,I release a laughter

suddenly happy,we'll be together in the kingdom high

the darkness takes me ,and thus die

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heroesfan1 said...
May 27, 2010 at 7:58 pm
Hey Mindy it is me Travis!!! I GOT AN ACCOUNT!!!!!! :) Nice Poem.
mindymax replied...
Jun. 24, 2010 at 4:51 pm

thats cool, totalawesomeness!!


mindymax said...
May 26, 2010 at 3:21 pm

I like the spaces... they make it dramatic.. Nice poem!!!]


christinerbeener said...
Mar. 18, 2009 at 8:05 pm
I love ur poem lil sis this reminds me of what i would want to feel when i fall in love, an dont pay attension to negative feedback!!!! love you!
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