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A Love Of The Ocean

March 1, 2009
By Anonymous

The waves lapped, at peoples feet,
Stealing their hearts forever
it was the love of the ocean that did it
that deadly, was the love, of the ocean.

The author's comments:
I hope you enjoyed my poem, it was my first proper poem so feel free to criticise!!!
This poem was inspired by the time I spent on Achilibuie Beach last summer. The beach means a lot to me and I hope you get the same out of this poem that I got from the beach.

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