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Dreams like soap bubbles
Swirling colors and pictures
Floating around and drifting away
Until they simply disappear

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DinosoarJen This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 23, 2009 at 9:37 pm
EdytD said...
Mar. 18, 2009 at 1:54 am
i like the imagery; even though it's short, you effectively manage to relay a lot of feeling. I also like the strong comparisons you give to achieve the desired effect. ;)
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