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Trapped,
On all sides
No way out,
Like the punishment for small children,
We all got when we were kids.
"Go to the corner!"
Except this time,
You can't turn around,
And escape.
They just don't understand,
So I don't even try to explain.
Tear stains on my mother's pillow,
But mine is soaked every night.
There's too much happening now.
My face is shamed,
My mother is cold,
I don't know anyone anymore.
Let me,
Just find the key
To open this steel box,
Enclosing me in humiliation and sorrow.
I want to be free,
And careless again,
Running through a field of daisies,
Innocent.
So I will find the strength,
To kick down those four walls,
To go against nature,
To become myself again,
To change,
Just not today.



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emo.panda101 said...
Sept. 11, 2009 at 8:19 pm
i love this i can relate to it alot
 
Alice M. said...
May 31, 2009 at 9:04 pm
great job! loved it! :)
 
lovehate29 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 28, 2009 at 5:17 pm
VERY BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN...KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!! I HAVE A POEM COMING SOON...IT IS ALSO CALLED TRAPPED! LOL....but for now, if you have time! will you please check out my poems and rate, comment them?? i would really appreciate it!! i wish you good luck on getting this published!!
 
VisionTrue This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 28, 2009 at 12:39 pm
i love it...
 
:PBUBBLES:P said...
May 15, 2009 at 8:36 pm
LOVE IT! I like the way you described the humiliation as a box, wonderful metaphor. I can totally relate to wanting to be innocent again, and remembering just how innocent I was.
 
gogreen2009 said...
May 12, 2009 at 1:48 am
I feel like that to so i see were you are coming from!(thank you for the comment!)
 
lots.of .luv said...
Apr. 17, 2009 at 2:56 pm
Hey, i love this poem and i can really relate. seriously, keep writing and don'y syop!!
 
darkprincess87 said...
Apr. 14, 2009 at 8:28 pm
this is great. i liked it alot. keep writing!!
 
kissingdawn331 said...
Apr. 14, 2009 at 6:53 pm
wow i can really relate ..great job
 
Christina This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 12, 2009 at 2:27 am
really great! i love the metaphor. definite eerie-ness
 
WriterDancerLover This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 5, 2009 at 4:45 pm
Hi thanks for the comment on my poem, "I Am From." I enjoyed your poem a lot! I've had those same feelings quite a few times in my life.
 
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