If I

February 27, 2009
By MariaMenendez GOLD, Brooklyn, New York
MariaMenendez GOLD, Brooklyn, New York
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If I feel like a one,
Will you add to me nine?
If I don't look too good,
Will you tell me I'm fine?
If I tell you slow down,
Will you take slow your time?
If I said, "I love you,"
Will you always be mine?

The author's comments:
At the moment I wrote this poem, I was conversing on AIM with the one person who has captured my heart. We had an argument over something I should not have done, but at the same time, he was understanding. He always understands how I feel and what is going though my mind, and when I don't feel good, he's always the first to cheer me up.

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on May. 10 2009 at 2:02 am
cutietothemax58 SILVER, Scottdale, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
Don't tell me the moon is shining; show me the glint of light on broken glass. ~Anton Chekhov


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