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A Pleasurable Problem

I lie on the floor slowly blending my mind into the peaceful sounds of my album,

my body and mind are dangling on the edge of a mysterious pit with no bottom,

a soft breeze floats through my window bringing with it the smell of blossom,

I feel a sharp feeling of bliss then it flashes into dark lonesome,

I realized I've made a mistake...I no longer feel wholesome,

I thought this is what I wanted, but I don't like this outcome,

the more I pondered on it the more it hurts like venom,

I'm losing control, I'm beating off rhythm,

I begged for my strength and my wisdom,

...a life without you, I can't even fathom,

Darling, you are my most wanted problem.




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KMG28This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jul. 16 at 12:51 am
I really enjoyed reading this poem. It is beautifully descriptive, especially in the way you described emotions. I like your writing :)
 
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Jul. 22 at 7:15 pm
Thank you so much @KMG28 !!! Would you like me to check out any of your works?
 
KMG28This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
today at 11:30 am
Yes, please. Thank you so much. I wish to read your comments and thoughts as well and i hope you enjoy.
 
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