A Pleasurable Problem

July 10, 2016
By Brooke,BrookeHarms SILVER, Burlington, Kentucky
Brooke,BrookeHarms SILVER, Burlington, Kentucky
5 articles 0 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
I don't have one yet, but I'll keep thinking.


I lie on the floor slowly blending my mind into the peaceful sounds of my album,

my body and mind are dangling on the edge of a mysterious pit with no bottom,

a soft breeze floats through my window bringing with it the smell of blossom,

I feel a sharp feeling of bliss then it flashes into dark lonesome,

I realized I've made a mistake...I no longer feel wholesome,

I thought this is what I wanted, but I don't like this outcome,

the more I pondered on it the more it hurts like venom,

I'm losing control, I'm beating off rhythm,

I begged for my strength and my wisdom,

...a life without you, I can't even fathom,

Darling, you are my most wanted problem.



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KMG28 SILVER said...
on Jul. 25 2016 at 11:30 am
KMG28 SILVER, Brooklyn , New York
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Favorite Quote:
“No one is born hating another person because of the color of his skin, or his background, or his religion. People must learn to hate, and if they can learn to hate, they can be taught to love, for love comes more naturally to the human heart than I

Yes, please. Thank you so much. I wish to read your comments and thoughts as well and i hope you enjoy.

on Jul. 22 2016 at 7:15 pm
Brooke,BrookeHarms SILVER, Burlington, Kentucky
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Favorite Quote:
I don't have one yet, but I'll keep thinking.

Thank you so much @KMG28 !!! Would you like me to check out any of your works?

KMG28 SILVER said...
on Jul. 16 2016 at 12:51 am
KMG28 SILVER, Brooklyn , New York
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Favorite Quote:
“No one is born hating another person because of the color of his skin, or his background, or his religion. People must learn to hate, and if they can learn to hate, they can be taught to love, for love comes more naturally to the human heart than I

I really enjoyed reading this poem. It is beautifully descriptive, especially in the way you described emotions. I like your writing :)


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