March 2, 2009
Slowly slipping
sudden dripping
it's gone, It's gone, it's gone.
how could we be so wrong?
We rush around to defeat
This strong warrior is never beat.
Like a silent killer in the night
it slips over you like a shadow,
you're out of sight.
you think that you're immortal,
but i know you're wrong.
You can keep running,
but this moment is
dead and

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_Elsy_ said...
Jul. 4, 2010 at 10:03 pm

Loved it, it is very deep and i love the message 5/5. keep writing.

btw-can you check out some of my stuff?

~*el-oh-vee-ee*~ said...
Nov. 6, 2009 at 7:57 pm
I agree with LaurenHaley(=, your poems are really good but small. :D and they have meaning all over them! i love your work!!! :D
LaurenHaley(= said...
Aug. 15, 2009 at 8:43 pm
gooood gweaf! you write such small poems, but the mean so mucccch!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
asiangurl... said...
May 18, 2009 at 12:34 pm
that was quite nice...i absolutly adore it!nice job:-)
sillyxgoose said...
Mar. 18, 2009 at 11:37 pm
This was written very well. Its really deep and meaningful. I love it. :) Good job.
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