TIMES UP!

Slowly slipping
sudden dripping
it's gone, It's gone, it's gone.
how could we be so wrong?
We rush around to defeat
This strong warrior is never beat.
Like a silent killer in the night
it slips over you like a shadow,
you're out of sight.
you think that you're immortal,
but i know you're wrong.
You can keep running,
but this moment is
dead and
Gone.





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_Elsy_ said...
Jul. 4, 2010 at 10:03 pm

Loved it, it is very deep and i love the message 5/5. keep writing.

btw-can you check out some of my stuff?

 
~*el-oh-vee-ee*~ said...
Nov. 6, 2009 at 7:57 pm
I agree with LaurenHaley(=, your poems are really good but small. :D and they have meaning all over them! i love your work!!! :D
 
LaurenHaley(= said...
Aug. 15, 2009 at 8:43 pm
gooood gweaf! you write such small poems, but the mean so mucccch!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
asiangurl... said...
May 18, 2009 at 12:34 pm
that was quite nice...i absolutly adore it!nice job:-)
 
sillyxgoose said...
Mar. 18, 2009 at 11:37 pm
This was written very well. Its really deep and meaningful. I love it. :) Good job.
 
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