WaitWeight

February 26, 2009
By AndThisIsReal PLATINUM, Broadalbin, New York
AndThisIsReal PLATINUM, Broadalbin, New York
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Dans chaque fil il y a un debut.


Wait
Weight
Holding me down
Holding me back
Leaving me waiting
For my everything
Every thing that may never happen
But how can I say I am waiting for nothing?
Because then I wouldn't be waiting
And inside I know I am.
'For you.


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on Nov. 3 2009 at 2:52 pm
AbbotRabbit GOLD, Abolana, District Of Columbia
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This poem has great flow and insight.
I really enjoyed it.
Lovely poem darling =]
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This poem is lovley darling=]

on Aug. 27 2009 at 3:22 pm
Inkspired PLATINUM, Whitby, Other
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"If one will scoff at the study of language, how, save in terms of language, will one scoff?" - Mario Pei
"I write for the same reason I breathe - because if I didn't, I would die." Isaac Asimov

Love this! I like how you use both wait and weight to describe why you're waiting. Just simply love it!


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