And I Could Swim In Your Eyes

February 26, 2009
By AndThisIsReal PLATINUM, Broadalbin, New York
AndThisIsReal PLATINUM, Broadalbin, New York
31 articles 0 photos 81 comments

Favorite Quote:
Dans chaque fil il y a un debut.


This is almost like
Procedure.

I can't feel a thing.

The pain is still there I just
Can't feel the sting.


Just when you feel as if I
Could float

I wind up with scraped knees.

'It always appeared so much farther to the ground

Just when I thought I could
Lose myself in his eyes'.

I drown.



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on Dec. 8 2009 at 1:35 am
emmajumbilia SILVER, Bellingham, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
"As soon as you stop wanting something, you get it" - Andy Warhol

This is amazing - it's impossible to only read once. You captured so much in so little words. Love it!

on Nov. 19 2009 at 8:14 pm
firstsnowfalls DIAMOND, Marcellus, New York
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Very emotional, moving, but to the point and not too lengthy. great job!

on Oct. 15 2009 at 3:16 pm
Inkspired PLATINUM, Whitby, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"If one will scoff at the study of language, how, save in terms of language, will one scoff?" - Mario Pei
"I write for the same reason I breathe - because if I didn't, I would die." Isaac Asimov

This is so full of emotion! I love the way you wrote it! I love how you end it.


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