And I Could Swim In Your Eyes

This is almost like
Procedure.

I can't feel a thing.

The pain is still there I just
Can't feel the sting.


Just when you feel as if I
Could float

I wind up with scraped knees.

'It always appeared so much farther to the ground

Just when I thought I could
Lose myself in his eyes'.

I drown.





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emmajumbilia said...
Dec. 8, 2009 at 1:35 am
This is amazing - it's impossible to only read once. You captured so much in so little words. Love it!
 
firstsnowfalls This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 19, 2009 at 8:14 pm
Very emotional, moving, but to the point and not too lengthy. great job!
 
Inkspired said...
Oct. 15, 2009 at 3:16 pm
This is so full of emotion! I love the way you wrote it! I love how you end it.
 
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