February 25, 2009
By Anonymous

When you cry does it hurt.when you shout does it make a difference. when you stand do you feel good. well i can answer those questions. yea when i cry i feel all the pain there is. It feels like im dying. i wish i could tell you how i felt. you might have thought later on that shes crazy. when i shout i think someones killing me.when i stand i have to sit because its demanding.why is it only me.why do i get treated this way. why do people treat me this way. on the outside i look happy and dont care. but on the inside im breaking down trying to find my way through the maze.

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Madison_R said...
on Mar. 28 2009 at 11:35 pm
Madison_R, Carrollton, Texas
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This is really great! I think if you broke it up into stanzas, its poetic rhythm would flow better. Have you considered that?


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