My Own Girl

February 24, 2009
By IRBFGW DIAMOND, Cincinnati, Ohio
IRBFGW DIAMOND, Cincinnati, Ohio
53 articles 1 photo 223 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Hey, assbutt!" Supernatural, Castiel.


I cry but no one hears me
I scream but no one cares
The smile that I used to see daily
Is now considered rare

Evreywhere I go
I silently scream
But no one hears me
It's like I'm walking in a dream

I feel like I'm floating
I'm not in this world
I have no one
I'm my own girl



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on Nov. 8 2009 at 1:47 pm
Geisbengals GOLD, West Jefferson, Ohio
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poems are a way of expressing fear pain anger love and regret... but this poem to me as a girl who has lost her way and is hoping that sum1 can lead her back to the right path... Dont worry ur great at ur writings stay strong and don't let the world get to u. You have amazing talent

on Oct. 22 2009 at 10:12 am
kissingdawn331 SILVER, Palatine, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
"when your hourglass runs out of sand you can't flip it over and start again."(changes weekly so check next weeks l8er)

wow i truly love it...it reminds me of my own work...the ones i don't post...i makes me want to cry

on Apr. 9 2009 at 9:24 pm
RainWashed PLATINUM, Park City, Utah
46 articles 1 photo 88 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Repeat the good and the bad. Do it all again. And pile on the years."

This is also really good. I'm a fan of your work. This should also be published in Teen Ink!!! This was another sad poem, which i think you're really great at by the way. Are these poems about you or are they about someone else or just made up out of your own emotions. Anyways a job well done.


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