My Own Girl

February 24, 2009
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I cry but no one hears me
I scream but no one cares
The smile that I used to see daily
Is now considered rare

Evreywhere I go
I silently scream
But no one hears me
It's like I'm walking in a dream

I feel like I'm floating
I'm not in this world
I have no one
I'm my own girl





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Geisbengals said...
Nov. 8, 2009 at 1:47 pm
poems are a way of expressing fear pain anger love and regret... but this poem to me as a girl who has lost her way and is hoping that sum1 can lead her back to the right path... Dont worry ur great at ur writings stay strong and don't let the world get to u. You have amazing talent
 
kissingdawn331 said...
Oct. 22, 2009 at 10:12 am
wow i truly love it...it reminds me of my own work...the ones i don't post...i makes me want to cry
 
Linklover95 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 9, 2009 at 9:24 pm
This is also really good. I'm a fan of your work. This should also be published in Teen Ink!!! This was another sad poem, which i think you're really great at by the way. Are these poems about you or are they about someone else or just made up out of your own emotions. Anyways a job well done.
 
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