Love is...

February 24, 2009
By LIKEwhoaa GOLD, Carrollton, Texas
LIKEwhoaa GOLD, Carrollton, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
The important thing is this: To be able at any moment to sacrifice what we are for what we could become.
-Charles DuBois


Love, a deep affection or devotion to someone, or at least, that's what Webster's says.

But I know love is so much more than that.
Love is, getting sweaty palms whenever he walks by. It's a heart pounding hug that floats you to the sky.
Love is, never wanting to say goodnight and close the door, and knowing that he's everything you are looking for.
Love is, walking by him and only being able to look at your shoes. It's also that tingly feeling whenever he smiles at you.
Love is heaven plus shopping plus chocolate times four.
Yes, love is all of these things and more.

Love, a deep affection or devotion to someone, or at least, that's what Webster's says.



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on Dec. 24 2009 at 9:26 pm
miz.pretty.yung.thang SILVER, Fortmill, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
The love that lasts the longest is the love that is never returned

i love this poem u have good talent.

Duckie430 said...
on Aug. 26 2009 at 2:28 am
Duckie430, Riverside, Rhode Island
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Favorite Quote:
“The secret to life is being who you are and being happy with who you are.”
"Whatever does not kill you only makes you stronger."

wow, that is sooo sweet. you really get your emotions across in your writing. wow.

on Aug. 12 2009 at 4:41 am
carolinesell PLATINUM, Cedar Falls, Iowa
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this was such a sweet poem! i like how you repeat the beginning at the end. it sort of ties you back in and makes you think about the message you're trying to send out. i love it!

Lonleydandy said...
on Jul. 16 2009 at 11:16 pm
Wow, I LOVE this poem. I wanted to check out some of your stuff because you commented on my poem! I am SO glad I did!!!!

LIKEwhoaa GOLD said...
on Jul. 16 2009 at 4:56 pm
LIKEwhoaa GOLD, Carrollton, Texas
13 articles 0 photos 126 comments

Favorite Quote:
The important thing is this: To be able at any moment to sacrifice what we are for what we could become.
-Charles DuBois

thankyou so much:) i am not sick of anyones comments btw, i love comments and constructive criticism so thankyou

<3

on Jul. 15 2009 at 4:41 pm
Hay_Wire PLATINUM, Independence, Missouri
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oh. my. god. wow. this is so perfect. lol. i have never ever been able to find the perfect words for that. and BAM there they are. wow. thankyou. lol..you must be getting sick of my comments, but i love your work..this has to be my favorite yet.


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