Angels promise

February 18, 2009
By linkin493 SILVER, Linden, Michigan
linkin493 SILVER, Linden, Michigan
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The realities are closer than you believe
When you dream you always see your future so supreme,
but the future so cold is the one we don't dream

When our eyes open
Light is filled within
and the dreams of a future
Are far and near between

Reality is closer to your dreams
When you realize
How long you have been someone else
When you could have been with me

Those dreams you dream to have
have been made a promise by my hand
That life that never shone
Begins to start a new
leaving behind those sorrows
forgotten and alone

That loneliness you never sought
has crept upon you as I talk
for when you wish to see me
I let you down

I wish I were an angel
to spread my wings and fly
sweep you in my arms
and forget this past
the pain we have endured
makes us ever last

The realities are closer than you believe
for when you shut your eyes
Those dreams of long past
have become the reality of this present

The author's comments:
This is the first piece of poetry i have written to someone. I wrote it to express how much i love my girlfriend.

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This article has 2 comments.

laskeygirl08 said...
on Apr. 1 2009 at 3:20 pm
You are an angel, you swept me off my feet the first time you kissed me. This poem has alot of meaning babe, i hope you never stop writing with passion.

Laskeygirl08 said...
on Mar. 22 2009 at 7:17 pm
Your a very good writer keep it up.


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