Fairies

February 23, 2009
By Wolfy DIAMOND, Huntsville, Alabama
Wolfy DIAMOND, Huntsville, Alabama
71 articles 0 photos 124 comments

Favorite Quote:
A room without a book is like a body without a soul.


Soft as a puppy's coat,
A fairy's glow shines.
Smooth as a dress' silk,
A fairy's flight goes.
Swift as a lightning's strike,
A fairy's flight is ended

Famous as a song's singer,
Their story goes on.
Fabled like a dragon's fire,
They will always be there.
Followed like a tornado's path,
They're hunted everywhere.



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Wolfy DIAMOND said...
on Oct. 11 2009 at 11:16 am
Wolfy DIAMOND, Huntsville, Alabama
71 articles 0 photos 124 comments

Favorite Quote:
A room without a book is like a body without a soul.

Thankyou for reading this and giving your feedback!

Originally, I wrote this for my little sister, but she hated it. I'm glad you like it!

on Sep. 5 2009 at 11:41 am
Hope_Princess BRONZE, Hebron, New Hampshire
4 articles 4 photos 377 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Hope sees the invisible, feels the intangible, and achieves the impossible."

This is so awesome and I love the part- smooth as a dress' silk a fairy's flight goes. Very very creative and descriptive.

Love it!

Keep writing!

Wolfy DIAMOND said...
on Aug. 26 2009 at 3:50 pm
Wolfy DIAMOND, Huntsville, Alabama
71 articles 0 photos 124 comments

Favorite Quote:
A room without a book is like a body without a soul.

Thabk you for reading this! No one has even looked at it in months!

on Aug. 26 2009 at 2:30 am
LoveLikeWoe DIAMOND, LeSueur, MN, Minnesota
54 articles 2 photos 748 comments

Favorite Quote:
Whoever laughs first has the sickest mind.

i don't know why no one comments on here! :( this is reallly good!! :) i love your work!

Wolfy DIAMOND said...
on Jun. 7 2009 at 9:53 pm
Wolfy DIAMOND, Huntsville, Alabama
71 articles 0 photos 124 comments

Favorite Quote:
A room without a book is like a body without a soul.

Thanx! And thanx once more for the advice!

EdytD SILVER said...
on May. 26 2009 at 3:48 pm
EdytD SILVER, Livingston, New Jersey
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This gives the traditional and perhaps cliched fairy a unique twist. i love the imagery. good job!



As to getting other people to comment, i read other peoples' poems and left comments - most of them returned the favor. If you just say "plz comment," though, they might not, so first provide constructive criticism or praise and then add something along the lines of: "i'd love if you took a look at my poetry. thanks!" this way, it shows you took the time to look at their poetry. :) hope it helps! :D


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