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Soft as a puppy's coat,
A fairy's glow shines.
Smooth as a dress' silk,
A fairy's flight goes.
Swift as a lightning's strike,
A fairy's flight is ended

Famous as a song's singer,
Their story goes on.
Fabled like a dragon's fire,
They will always be there.
Followed like a tornado's path,
They're hunted everywhere.





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Wolfayne said...
Oct. 11, 2009 at 11:16 am
Thankyou for reading this and giving your feedback!
Originally, I wrote this for my little sister, but she hated it. I'm glad you like it!
 
Hope_Princess said...
Sept. 5, 2009 at 11:41 am
This is so awesome and I love the part- smooth as a dress' silk a fairy's flight goes. Very very creative and descriptive.
Love it!
Keep writing!
 
Wolfayne said...
Aug. 26, 2009 at 3:50 pm
Thabk you for reading this! No one has even looked at it in months!
 
~*The-Broken-Hearted-Girl*~ said...
Aug. 26, 2009 at 2:30 am
i don't know why no one comments on here! :( this is reallly good!! :) i love your work!
 
Wolfayne said...
Jun. 7, 2009 at 9:53 pm
Thanx! And thanx once more for the advice!
 
EdytD said...
May 26, 2009 at 3:48 pm
This gives the traditional and perhaps cliched fairy a unique twist. i love the imagery. good job!

As to getting other people to comment, i read other peoples' poems and left comments - most of them returned the favor. If you just say "plz comment," though, they might not, so first provide constructive criticism or praise and then add something along the lines of: "i'd love if you took a look at my poetry. thanks!" this way, it shows you took the time to look at their poetry... (more »)
 
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