U Messed Up

February 22, 2009
By dymiindprincess8 SILVER, Brooklyn, New York
dymiindprincess8 SILVER, Brooklyn, New York
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I havent felt this way in so long
You were the one that i wanted
the one i thought would finally change me
but instead u turned around and played me
you lied and then tried to make it seem like u were all for me
but you messed up and its messed up cuz i coulda loved you
u culda been the one for me....
and now that were not together im missin you like crazy
i feel like a book with no story
incomplete
when i first met u i remember u sweeping me off my feet
but u said u could never love
you said that as long as your treatin me right it shouldnt matter who you do or where u go at night as long as u did it without hurtin me
but you was hurtin me
and that was something that you couldnt see
you messed up and its messed up cause i culda loved you
u culda been the one for me
now i see you were just like the rest
but i still dont know y u felt like the best
i tried to make it work but u treated the relationship like dirt
so forgwt it
u messed up and its messed up
but im glad to say we broke up


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honeylups said...
on Mar. 8 2009 at 3:32 am
cute poem couldve been better i think

on Mar. 7 2009 at 1:15 pm
yo this reminds me of my last relationship im so glad me n that boi deaded it i like this poem

on Mar. 7 2009 at 6:37 am
dymiindprincess8 SILVER, Brooklyn, New York
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love it!! so talented


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