I can't Belive

February 21, 2009
By Kaeli GOLD, Elmont, New York
Kaeli GOLD, Elmont, New York
13 articles 1 photo 4 comments

I can't believe what happened.
I can't believe what you did to me.
You can't think that I really care.
You care more about your stupid hair.
You disrespect me in everyway.
With me and my friends that's not ok.
To everyone else you're really cool
To me and my friends you're just a fool.
But, everyone else won't believe me!
Why can't they see who you really are?
All they see is a person who you don't seem to be
Why are you doing this to me?
I can't believe all that you do
Cheat on your girl
Never tell the truth
Disrespectful to your friends
When will this craziness end?
I'm sorry that we were ever friends.
You know what we were more than that
We were meant to be something else
But you cheated on me according
To everyone else
You disrespected me anyway
Cheating didn't do you any good
Anyway I'll miss you
But I mustered up the courage to leave
All that's left is for you to believe
That you were not meant to be
This person that everybody sees
Dying on the inside
Lying on the out
Don't you see what we could've been?

The author's comments:
I wrote this about a guy friend who severed ties with me because his girlfriend didn't like me. I was kind of depressed but all of this is true.

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This article has 2 comments.

conner said...
on Mar. 6 2009 at 2:00 pm
This was very good. please do more, great work.

Kaeli GOLD said...
on Mar. 6 2009 at 3:00 am
Kaeli GOLD, Elmont, New York
13 articles 1 photo 4 comments
Hi everyone if you are actually reading this I thank you. And I made up the part about the guy friend with the girlfriend. I also want you to know that the apostrophes are coming out weird and that I hope you are not mad at moi.


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