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February 21, 2009
By Ellie.M. PLATINUM, Santa Paula, California
Ellie.M. PLATINUM, Santa Paula, California
47 articles 1 photo 133 comments

What do i do when i look around
see nothing but a sinking town
i can't try and save it all
cause i know it's all gonna fall
love no longer
die from hunger
burning houses
we are frightened like little mouses
we are going down under
trouble loud as thunder
sleepless nights
cause all in fright
filled with nothing but sorrow
will we go through the same tomorrow



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rzbaker said...
on Mar. 3 2010 at 10:19 pm
This was really creative. It was so powerful I had to read it twice. . . I can't wait to read your next poem.

on Feb. 24 2010 at 12:17 pm
Ellie.M. PLATINUM, Santa Paula, California
47 articles 1 photo 133 comments
thank you :)

on Feb. 24 2010 at 8:58 am
PoetLaureate07 PLATINUM, Aberdeen, Mississippi
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Favorite Quote:
To love is to risk not being loved in return. To hope is to risk pain. To try is to risk failure, but the greatest hazard in life is to risk nothing..

This one is really pretty!!! Keep writing!!

on Feb. 18 2010 at 2:44 pm
Ellie.M. PLATINUM, Santa Paula, California
47 articles 1 photo 133 comments
true thanks for the tips :)

twiwrite GOLD said...
on Feb. 17 2010 at 2:35 pm
twiwrite GOLD, Modesto, California
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Favorite Quote:
none :P

i liked the rhym in this one it made the dread a little less dreadfull and a little more light


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