February 21, 2009
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What do i do when i look around
see nothing but a sinking town
i can't try and save it all
cause i know it's all gonna fall
love no longer
die from hunger
burning houses
we are frightened like little mouses
we are going down under
trouble loud as thunder
sleepless nights
cause all in fright
filled with nothing but sorrow
will we go through the same tomorrow

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rzbaker said...
Mar. 3, 2010 at 10:19 pm
This was really creative. It was so powerful I had to read it twice. . . I can't wait to read your next poem.
PoetLaureate07 said...
Feb. 24, 2010 at 8:58 am
This one is really pretty!!! Keep writing!!
***3Lli3*** replied...
Feb. 24, 2010 at 12:17 pm
thank you :)
twiwrite said...
Feb. 17, 2010 at 2:35 pm
i liked the rhym in this one it made the dread a little less dreadfull and a little more light
***3Lli3*** replied...
Feb. 18, 2010 at 2:44 pm
true thanks for the tips :)
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