Yesterday's Tomorrow

February 21, 2009
By Ellie.M. PLATINUM, Santa Paula, California
Ellie.M. PLATINUM, Santa Paula, California
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i'm here to see another day
to save another life
to fix all that's broken
never say goodbye
i try and try
and never win
but i know that today is the day
that i will succeed
i will win
you will be proud
and everything will go on about
it's like nothing ever happened
that it was all make believe
it's all right in front of you
why can't you see
close your mind
open your heart
and then, then you will see


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on Apr. 11 2010 at 9:40 pm
freedomfighter97 BRONZE, Lake Ann, Michigan
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Very lovely!  I like the line "and everything will go on."  Add more flavorful words for a more vivid word picture in the reader's mind.  Other than that, great!

on Apr. 11 2010 at 4:00 pm
shelterisland GOLD, Montclair, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
-Biting's excellent. It's like kissing only there's a winner."-Doctor Who, The Tardis

i really like it!

on Apr. 11 2010 at 8:20 am
I loved every bit of it except from "but i know that today is the day" to "and everything will go on about". Probably because those lines seemed more uplifting. Lol, I just love the saddest poems. Just wondering, do you have to be over thirteen to get an account/submit work/get the magazine? If you do, I don't think you have to be thirteen to appreciate good literature. Who agrees?

lovevball said...
on Mar. 8 2010 at 4:30 pm
lovevball, Middletown, Maryland
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haha!! eat something in your house :)

on Mar. 8 2010 at 2:42 pm
Ellie.M. PLATINUM, Santa Paula, California
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ugh im so hungry but i dnt have money on me to go and buy lunch :(

lovevball said...
on Mar. 8 2010 at 1:58 pm
lovevball, Middletown, Maryland
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watching ellen degeneres show :))

on Mar. 7 2010 at 1:57 pm
Ellie.M. PLATINUM, Santa Paula, California
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hahah.! Yah you will get better... hopefully lol so what you doing.?

lovevball said...
on Mar. 5 2010 at 9:15 pm
lovevball, Middletown, Maryland
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i stink at basketball!!! haha. i cant even shoot a foul shot.........

on Mar. 5 2010 at 2:37 pm
Ellie.M. PLATINUM, Santa Paula, California
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ohh that sucks lol i play basketball.!

lovevball said...
on Mar. 4 2010 at 3:05 pm
lovevball, Middletown, Maryland
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just got home from volleybal workouts. im really sore. haha

lovevball said...
on Mar. 4 2010 at 3:04 pm
lovevball, Middletown, Maryland
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just got home from volleyball workouts... im really sore!! haha

on Mar. 3 2010 at 2:38 pm
Ellie.M. PLATINUM, Santa Paula, California
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hahah so whats up.?

lovevball said...
on Mar. 2 2010 at 2:30 pm
lovevball, Middletown, Maryland
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Oh. thats fine. haha

on Mar. 1 2010 at 2:35 pm
Ellie.M. PLATINUM, Santa Paula, California
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i dnt remember sorry

lovevball said...
on Feb. 28 2010 at 9:23 pm
lovevball, Middletown, Maryland
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i got an e-mail that you responded to this, but i accidentally deleted the message before i got to read what you wrote. so what was it? Sorry

on Feb. 27 2010 at 9:35 pm
Ellie.M. PLATINUM, Santa Paula, California
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aww thanks :) hahah what type of writing do u like best.?

lovevball said...
on Feb. 26 2010 at 8:28 pm
lovevball, Middletown, Maryland
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the website link never got posted :((

lovevball said...
on Feb. 26 2010 at 8:28 pm
lovevball, Middletown, Maryland
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i think 10. or something like that

on Feb. 26 2010 at 3:14 pm
Claire_Milan PLATINUM, Waldorf, Maryland
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Favorite Quote:
"Love that we cannot have is the one that lasts the longest, hurts the deepest, and feels the strongest because True Love cannot be found where it truly doesn't exist nor can it be hidden where it truly does."---A wise young man

This poem was very inspirational. I simply LOVED it. I think you should most definitely keep writing. It makes me want to read the rest of your work.

on Feb. 26 2010 at 2:38 pm
Ellie.M. PLATINUM, Santa Paula, California
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Oh okay.. How many views do u have on your most viewed poem.?




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