Torn Apart

February 20, 2009
By loveme<3 BRONZE, Mesquite, Texas
loveme<3 BRONZE, Mesquite, Texas
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Torn apart, trying to find a way out of this trap, but I see nowhere.

You and I, forever together, is how it was supposed to be.

Now my heart, chained and locked away, is ready to shatter in a million pieces.

My mind can't think straight, jumping from thought to thought of you, because that's what my heart really misses.

My love for you is real, so unbelievably real, and you're gone now.

Confused and not knowing what to do, living life in a haze, why this happened is all I really want to know.

The author's comments:
This is how I'm feeling about me and my boyfriend of nine months. Not even a week after he gave me a promise ring, he broke up with me.

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on Apr. 1 2009 at 1:51 pm
Kendra92 SILVER, The Colony, Texas
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This is amazing, and really sad at the same time. You express your thoughts so clearly. Yo are a great writer! I hope things get better...


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