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i don't know if what i'm doing is wrong
i don't feel like i belong
i feel like a puzzle that's missing a piece
i feel like an outcast when i am teased
is there something wrong with me
something i can't see
i try to look ahead
as i do my heart is being shred
people expect to much of me
i just run away, i flee
i need to face my fears
stand up to all my peers
tell them to stop
now i'm on top
i conquered my troubles
now laying down in a pile of rubble
no one tells me what to do
i stand tall, as you should too





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dominicana said...
Apr. 18, 2010 at 9:05 pm
i thought the poem was outstanding and inspiring i think a lot of people can realte to it keep on writing♥
 
Vivallaa said...
Mar. 20, 2010 at 9:30 am
You have a very good writing style. Although, you don't have to rhyme all the time :) sometimes it works out but sometimes it just sounds like your rhyming.
 
Shahed said...
Mar. 5, 2010 at 8:07 pm
Very intersting!
" I stand tall, as you should too"
 
lostnhim said...
Feb. 19, 2010 at 8:55 pm
I love this poem!!!!You are an amazing fantastic writer!!!
 
***3Lli3*** replied...
Feb. 20, 2010 at 1:46 pm
thanks :) do u have any poems or stories and such on here.?
 
abstractminded replied...
Feb. 22, 2010 at 7:40 am
wow this is a very good poem....u definitely have a great writing sensability
 
***3Lli3*** replied...
Feb. 22, 2010 at 9:13 am
Thanks do u have any poems on here.?
 
abstractminded replied...
Feb. 22, 2010 at 9:53 am
yeah dont remeber me i wrote that poem the truth u read
 
***3Lli3*** replied...
Feb. 22, 2010 at 2:39 pm
hahah yeah sorry that was an old comment
 
bound4life4ever This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 19, 2010 at 6:26 pm
hey... in the beginning of this poem you said u felt like a puzzle missing a piece. i can tell you what that piece is if u wanna know. its something amazing. nice work by the way! i love this poem cuz its reallly easy to realte to.
GABBY
 
***3Lli3*** replied...
Feb. 20, 2010 at 1:46 pm
Thanks that means a lot what do u think the missing piece is.?
 
PoetLaureate07 said...
Feb. 17, 2010 at 8:45 am
Wonderful!!! I can actually relate!!! I'm like you... i write about experiences or just feelings... Check out some of my stuff....... XD
 
***3Lli3*** replied...
Feb. 18, 2010 at 2:49 pm
i will thanks :) any more tips.?
 
PoetLaureate07 replied...
Feb. 24, 2010 at 9:05 am
idk if i've said this yet or not, but write from the heart.... that's where all the good stuff comes from!!
 
***3Lli3*** replied...
Feb. 24, 2010 at 12:16 pm
how long have u been writing.?
 
amanda727 said...
Jan. 19, 2010 at 3:03 pm
Hey :)
This is really good; it is straight to the point and expresses real emotions ...
um if I could suggest one thing...I'd say that, this piece is very strong and very true and real and raw....don't feel like you have to have a rhyming scheme. Sometimes the most powerful poems have no scheme at all. Good job though :) you're talented.
 
***3Lli3*** replied...
Jan. 20, 2010 at 8:44 pm
thanks :) yeah lol my new ones are better i wrote these like in 7th grade i just started posting them on here one day after my teacher introduced me to this site and I ABSOLUTELY LOVE IT.! LOL. how did u start writing.?
 
Jessie B. said...
Apr. 30, 2009 at 4:03 pm
wow this really amazing :) a lot of people write good poetry but urs is the kind people refer to when writing their own
 
***3Lli3*** replied...
Jan. 15, 2010 at 4:56 pm
thx lol this is like a year later lol but thanks
 
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