February 8, 2009
Happiness seems bright blue,
Like the shining ocean of summer.
I see lots of kids running around.
I hear lots of laughter.
I smell the salty seawater.
I touch the soft sand of the beach.
I taste the sweetness of my tears of happiness.

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mrbananaman9 said...
Apr. 7, 2009 at 1:34 am
I actually should thank my teacher,Ms.Williams,for trying to make me write poetry.Now I enjoy it.
mrbananaman9 said...
Apr. 5, 2009 at 11:09 pm
bubblylittledancer said...
Apr. 1, 2009 at 6:55 pm
i LOVE the way you used the metaphors here!!! keep writing this, you're a poetry genius!!!!
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