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Remember the summer, I miss you.

February 13, 2009
By taisha BRONZE, Beulah, North Dakota
taisha BRONZE, Beulah, North Dakota
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When we were kids
It was all a joke
We'd chase each other around
Maybe even a tickle and a poke

It was silly then
Because it wasn't that deep
But the thought is haunting me now
Sometimes I don't sleep

You were my crush
For what seems like forever
But the pain is killing me now
Because now it won't happen, ever

This summer was a blast
We hung out all the time
Secretly wishing
With each day that you were mine

But you had to go back
You had to leave
I'm almost in tears
It's gettin' harder to breathe

We're losing touch
And i'm scared to lose you
You were my summer
Sorry i never told you

But your hand is slipping
I'm losing my grip
The tears are falling faster
My hand is about to slip

We talked for hours
And ate ice cream
A classic summer
It all seems like a dream

If it was
I would never wake up
I'd dream about you forever
And I'd never give up

I miss so much
I can't even explain it
Wouldn't take it back
I would never change it

I will always miss you
I will always remember
Please don't forget me
Please, not ever?

The strand is thinning
There's only one choice
One last chance
To speak up with my voice

But it takes two
You've heard my side
So what's yours?
Are you along for the ride?

I'll miss the summer days
And mostly the nights
They were the best
Even with the fights

I hate asking you
"How is it down there?"
Because it reminds me
That life isn't fair

It's all a remember when
It hurt more than you knew
I really cared
I still do

Hurry fast
Don't let go
I'm falling faster now
But it all seems so slow

You're down there
And I'm up here
Just so you know
I'll always hold you dear

This is a horrible pain
Knowing you're gone
It's cutting me deep
And I'm not ready to move on

You're letting go
And my hand is slipping
The only sound
Is the thread ripping

The world is spinning
I close my eyes
My heart just shattered
Now end my silent cries


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Tanisha GOLD said...
on Apr. 19 2009 at 5:40 pm
Tanisha GOLD, Oregon, Missouri
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Omgsh girl you are amazing..you kinda made a greater inspiartion to get in touch with my inner self to actually try harder than i am! keep it up. love to read more of your week.

Jimmy GOLD said...
on Mar. 20 2009 at 1:06 pm
Jimmy GOLD, Minneapolis, Minnesota
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This is great (for real!)

thanks for the comment (on my poem)



(we kinda have the same style but your a bit better then me at writing)

Thanks again and keep writing!

taisha BRONZE said...
on Mar. 20 2009 at 1:21 am
taisha BRONZE, Beulah, North Dakota
1 article 0 photos 4 comments
please tell me how you feel about it. even though not a lot of people will ever read it.