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In The Rain

February 16, 2009
By XxJaggedJessxX SILVER, Frisco, Texas
XxJaggedJessxX SILVER, Frisco, Texas
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Bright red truck
Sitting in the parking lot
Perfectly gleaming
In the sunshine
A flash of light
Its raining now
Thunder and lightning
The right front end
Seemingly not much damage
Harmless for the driver
Scott, my best friend
Or so I thought
And then
He appears
Or his ghost does
Standing by the truck
That was once glorious
And as fast as he appeared
He is gone
With the high winds
And the rain
Forever a memory

The author's comments:
This is a dream I had a few days ago... I woke up crying that morning...

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on Mar. 1 2009 at 5:44 pm
FindingAWay67 BRONZE, Glen Burnie, Maryland
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i love this piece you are very good write more ill keep looking

on Feb. 28 2009 at 10:20 pm
ElizabethS. PLATINUM, Oklahoma City, Oklahoma
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This was really lovely. The imagery was great, and it all made sense. It was obviously a horrible dream, just as you said.

on Feb. 28 2009 at 7:20 pm
mang9believe GOLD, Rigby, Idaho
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Favorite Quote:
“You were smitten with me. You were speechless to behold my beauty. You had never met anyone so fascinating. You thought of me every waking minute. You dreamed about me. You couldn’t stand it. You couldn’t let such wonderfulness out of your sight" SC

Thats a very good poem, I'm sorry you woke up crying..During the summer I didn't want to sleep, because i was afriad of what i might dream about or who..