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oh dear

oh my dear
i wish
you could see
what i had been doing
to you
i gave you my heart
my everything
and you are blinded
by something
and i can't feel you anymore
oh my dear
i love you
but there's something
you are not telling me



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hannahbell said...
Mar. 2, 2009 at 5:22 am:
i can really feel the emotion in this.
if you get a chance, you should look at some of my work. i'd really appreciate it.
 
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dot.! said...
Mar. 2, 2009 at 3:36 am:
i really like it! i can feel the emotion and i can definitely relate!! keep it up!! check out my poem too please! its http://www.teenink.com/raw/Poetry/article/86470/Somewhere-Away/ thanks!!
 
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