oh dear

February 16, 2009
By asiangurl... GOLD, Oshkosh, Wisconsin
asiangurl... GOLD, Oshkosh, Wisconsin
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oh my dear
i wish
you could see
what i had been doing
to you
i gave you my heart
my everything
and you are blinded
by something
and i can't feel you anymore
oh my dear
i love you
but there's something
you are not telling me


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on Mar. 2 2009 at 5:22 am
hannahbell BRONZE, Ramsey, New Jersey
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i can really feel the emotion in this.

if you get a chance, you should look at some of my work. i'd really appreciate it.

dot.! BRONZE said...
on Mar. 2 2009 at 3:36 am
dot.! BRONZE, Acworth, Georgia
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i really like it! i can feel the emotion and i can definitely relate!! keep it up!! check out my poem too please! its TeenInk.com/raw/Poetry/article/86470/Somewhere-Away/ thanks!!




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