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The Bowl

My creation
Was created
In the thoughts of you...

It contains
The memories
All of the smiles we shared too...

If you feel
Deep enough
You can see,

The gently
Carved designs
Made with every inch of me...

When you
Hold it
In your hands,

I hope you feel
The deep earth,
The ocean sands...

I hope you feel
The deep engravings,
As deep as the love from my heart...

I hope you feel
How deeply I care
Come any circumstances
Our friendship will never part.





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The Brian said...
Jun. 27, 2009 at 10:44 am
This is very sweet merina.. i loved it, i can imagine you speaking each line.. it's also very clever. much love. keep in touch.
 
Mr. H said...
Jun. 5, 2009 at 8:44 pm
It's so cool how your head, heart, eyes, hands, and hopes blend together and burst into so many forms of beauty. I really admire you, Merina. (And maybe envy you a little bit, too.)
 
iluvfruitbasket3 said...
Jun. 1, 2009 at 9:04 pm
its a very good poem
 
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