This Evil

February 12, 2009
By Amanda101 BRONZE, Serling Heights, Michigan
Amanda101 BRONZE, Serling Heights, Michigan
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Take this Evil
Take it all,
Take this Evil
From the hall.

Take this Evil
It's on the Ball,
Take this Evil
Take my Call.

Take this Evil
It's on you now,
Take this Evil
I'll tell you how.

When you call this Evil
It won't come to you,
So call this Evil
I'll give you a clue.
Make this Evil your own
Take it to the pound,
But your truly now bound
To give this Evil a home,
So it won't be alone!!!

The author's comments:
I love to do Poetry in my spare time. This is my first piece, so i would really like some feedback, please.

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This article has 4 comments.

on May. 15 2009 at 11:46 pm
Hey Baby girl. YOU ROCK!!! Love Mom

chanileoha said...
on Apr. 30 2009 at 3:58 pm
This is great! You should be super proud!!!

I'd love to read more of your peotry next time we come visit:)

bumpa said...
on Mar. 5 2009 at 9:29 pm
I thought your poem was very well written. It took a lot of thought and I was impressed. Keep up the good work.

edwardtem13 said...
on Mar. 3 2009 at 9:19 pm
omg i love this poem it is awesome

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