Gym

February 11, 2009
By Bridie ELITE, Massapequa, New York
Bridie ELITE, Massapequa, New York
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Favorite Quote:
She can because she thinks she can.


The clock goes round
and round anxiously waiting
for gym, one of the best
specials. No wonder why we
have it twice a week only
if we had it twice a day.
The clock goes round
and round.


The author's comments:
written in fith gade 2005 my 2nd poem.

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on Mar. 7 2009 at 3:41 am
Hay_Wire PLATINUM, Independence, Missouri
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wow. i like all of these..but where are some recent ones? :)

carijoy SILVER said...
on Mar. 3 2009 at 2:19 am
carijoy SILVER, Phoenix, Arizona
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I love your poem! It is short and sweet; the structure fits it perfectly. I LOVE your use of syntax to create an image of the clock going around and around, by repeating it.

It was excellent!

TJJIII said...
on Feb. 26 2009 at 1:41 am
nice job!




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