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The clock goes round
and round anxiously waiting
for gym, one of the best
specials. No wonder why we
have it twice a week only
if we had it twice a day.
The clock goes round
and round.





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Anonymous This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 7, 2009 at 3:41 am
wow. i like all of these..but where are some recent ones? :)
 
cariberry24 said...
Mar. 3, 2009 at 2:19 am
I love your poem! It is short and sweet; the structure fits it perfectly. I LOVE your use of syntax to create an image of the clock going around and around, by repeating it.
It was excellent!
 
TJJIII said...
Feb. 26, 2009 at 1:41 am
nice job!
 
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