mistakes

February 11, 2009
By rain-rain111 PLATINUM, Roselle, Illinois
rain-rain111 PLATINUM, Roselle, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
He offered her the world but she said she had her own.


As I lye in the middle of my bed,
The many mistakes I made creep into my head.
I cringe at the thought.
My tears I fought.
My heart is full of dread.
I want to sleep.
But my thoughts are to deep.
I want to weep.
But my control I keep.
The mistakes I made will not go away'.


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on Mar. 3 2009 at 8:32 am
Weightless2015 GOLD, Roselle, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
"Dream with my eyes open, sleep when I'm dead, love who my heart's chosen, and conquer what lies ahead." -Ryan Follese (lead singer of Hot Chelle Rae)

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on Feb. 25 2009 at 12:15 am
iheartvolleyball, North Jersey, New Jersey
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i like the rhyming and the flow

just so you know you have some grammatical errors

in the first line it should be lie instead of lye

and in line 7 it should be too instead of to

i don't know if you meant to do it that way but i just wanted to let you know


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