mistakes

As I lye in the middle of my bed,
The many mistakes I made creep into my head.
I cringe at the thought.
My tears I fought.
My heart is full of dread.
I want to sleep.
But my thoughts are to deep.
I want to weep.
But my control I keep.
The mistakes I made will not go away'.





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Kattykat418 said...
Mar. 3, 2009 at 8:32 am
bootiful
 
peacelovehappiness said...
Feb. 25, 2009 at 12:15 am
i like the rhyming and the flow
just so you know you have some grammatical errors
in the first line it should be lie instead of lye
and in line 7 it should be too instead of to
i don't know if you meant to do it that way but i just wanted to let you know
 
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