11:11 Wish's

February 11, 2009
He was my crush for all these years.
We became friends
We had our differences but
Like grew to love
Weakness's became stronger than ever
My eye's were opened
Our paths meet
Everything fell into place
Then one day i stood next to you
saying "I do"
making all my 11:11 wish's
Come True.





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lovelauren3 said...
Mar. 3, 2010 at 10:32 pm
Why did you use the wrong forms of wishes, eyes, and weaknesses? There's no showing of ownership or a contraction so it looks to be a gramatical error, but I might be missing a metaphor or something? Haha, help me out here.
 
peace said...
Feb. 25, 2009 at 12:47 am
i really liked your poem and how the title was taken from the last line of the poem.
great job =]
 
LoveYoung15 replied...
Oct. 11, 2009 at 12:02 pm
thanks for the comment. i tend to actually write the title first then incorperate the poem with the title.idky it seems to work fairly well for me.
 
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