11:11 Wish's

February 11, 2009
By livingconfused GOLD, Portville, New York
livingconfused GOLD, Portville, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"True love does not come by finding the perfect person, but by learning to see an imperfect person perfectly." -Jason Jordan

"I feel like I'm waiting for something that's never going to happen."


He was my crush for all these years.
We became friends
We had our differences but
Like grew to love
Weakness's became stronger than ever
My eye's were opened
Our paths meet
Everything fell into place
Then one day i stood next to you
saying "I do"
making all my 11:11 wish's
Come True.


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on Mar. 3 2010 at 10:32 pm
love.lauren GOLD, Eagle Lake, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
"That's Sweeto!"-my friend, Shelby

Why did you use the wrong forms of wishes, eyes, and weaknesses? There's no showing of ownership or a contraction so it looks to be a gramatical error, but I might be missing a metaphor or something? Haha, help me out here.

on Oct. 11 2009 at 12:02 pm
livingconfused GOLD, Portville, New York
14 articles 5 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
"True love does not come by finding the perfect person, but by learning to see an imperfect person perfectly." -Jason Jordan

"I feel like I'm waiting for something that's never going to happen."

thanks for the comment. i tend to actually write the title first then incorperate the poem with the title.idky it seems to work fairly well for me.

on Feb. 25 2009 at 12:47 am
iheartvolleyball, North Jersey, New Jersey
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i really liked your poem and how the title was taken from the last line of the poem.

great job =]


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