Eclipse of the Heart

February 8, 2009
By kaelyn GOLD, East Northport, New York
kaelyn GOLD, East Northport, New York
18 articles 95 photos 21 comments

You captivated me
With everything I couldn't see
Before you left me standing here
Past all hope, beyond all fear
And I wish I could just find
The pieces that I left behind
When I fell into eternity
Without a hope that you'd catch me
So trap me in your arms forever
We'll break the bonds of time together
And you had me blind from the start
In a total eclipse of the heart


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on Nov. 2 2009 at 7:43 pm
bamboom212 PLATINUM, Chestnut Ridge, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"The truth with a bad intent, is worse than any lie you can ever invent."
"You are smarter than you think. You are stronger than you look. You are braver than you feel."

Loving and really sweet. It really shows how love makes a person feel.

on Feb. 23 2009 at 3:36 am
Alexxxandra77 BRONZE, Hinton, Other
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this is really sweet, i like it alot

on Feb. 22 2009 at 4:38 pm
Readalot101 BRONZE, Nowhere, Kentucky
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i had to read that poem twice it was so good!! I can't find anything bad to say about it!!


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