My Love Stops When Fascination Falls So

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Partly falling,
The fascination turning into praise.
When my fresh lonely loves,
Have once again fallen upwards
and for that good part,
Into liars they are when all have been stopped.





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summerhillshamrock said...
Feb. 28, 2009 at 12:34 am
This poem is interesting, if you didn't give an explaination the reader would constantly be trying to figure out some hidden meaning. If you write a part two let it be a mystery...good work!
 
purplehaze said...
Feb. 22, 2009 at 4:34 pm
can you add write a part II to this, i'd like to hear more
 
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