To Ezra, from Liddyuh

January 19, 2009
By PK4evr ELITE, Allen, Texas
PK4evr ELITE, Allen, Texas
105 articles 5 photos 107 comments

Favorite Quote:
When life gives you lemons, make grape juice, then watch everyone wonder how you did it!


Edit
To Ezra, from Liddyuh. This is fiction. 3:24pm
What are you thinking?
are you out of your mind?
I know everything's been difficult
but please, don't die.
I've seen how you've changed
to be honest, you frightened me
but no matter how hard I tried
your gaze skipped over me
I knew what you were thinking
to a certain extent
but I've mostly been guessing
even though I understand
when I heard the door open
I knew it was you
I rushed to the cliff
because I knew
I was nearly too late
you actually jumped
but I barely managed
to stop that fate
but what did you decide
when you heard me speak?
I'm just afraid
that the lapping water
wasn't just the sound of the ocean
but that maybe
you broke your promise
and also broke my heart


The author's comments:
I know that it stopped rhyming but I would rather leave it that way.

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PK4evr ELITE said...
on Jun. 3 2009 at 7:58 pm
PK4evr ELITE, Allen, Texas
105 articles 5 photos 107 comments

Favorite Quote:
When life gives you lemons, make grape juice, then watch everyone wonder how you did it!

Yes, sorry for not making that clear, XXcrazy_amazingXX

on Jun. 3 2009 at 5:31 pm
xxjosiexx143 SILVER, Lexington Twp., Maine
9 articles 6 photos 23 comments
This is a good poem, and just to make it clear, this is about someone trying to commit suicide and someone trying to stop him, right?

BirdMan SILVER said...
on May. 7 2009 at 3:38 am
BirdMan SILVER, St. Louis, Missouri
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I think this is definitely one of your better poems...




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