true and pure

February 10, 2009
By Blue-Eyed BRONZE, Jacksonville, Florida
Blue-Eyed BRONZE, Jacksonville, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Wake up with a smile. Live the day to the fullest. And go to bed with a prayer.


By day I laugh.
By night I cry.
My heart wants true and pure love.
My parents have true and pure love.
So many things are true and pure.
The purest love.
The purest water.
The purest flower.
The purest fruit.
The purest truth.
The purest heart.
So many things are true and pure.
The truth of love.
The truth of beauty.
The truth of having.
The truth of wanting.
The truth of loving.
The wanting and having true and pure love.
To want to have true love.
To want to have pure love.
The wanting and having true and pure love.

The author's comments:
this poem came from a bored day in english class when i finished a test early. It came from the heart.

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This article has 7 comments.

NJDiva said...
on Feb. 24 2009 at 2:02 am
WOW! If thats what happens when your bored...I wonder what you can create when you are interested in a subject!

Nice Job Honey!

Love from NJ!

Belle said...
on Feb. 23 2009 at 11:23 pm
Way to go!! I love it. If only the world could be so simple. Keep up the excellent work and do what you do best. Love ya

JohnOOO' said...
on Feb. 22 2009 at 7:52 pm
I think this poem is great. I am so proud of the author that wrote it.

modib said...
on Feb. 21 2009 at 3:19 pm
love the repetition you used; it adds weight to your feelings! Great use of that literary device....Keep writing!!

modib said...
on Feb. 21 2009 at 3:11 pm
the repetition you used added weight to your feelings in the poem. Great choice of literary device!

Keep writing!!!!

on Feb. 19 2009 at 2:29 pm
Twilightpeaceluver BRONZE, Jacksonville, Florida
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lt9510 said...
on Feb. 17 2009 at 10:23 pm
wow this was very good i loved the first five lines

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