my fault

February 2, 2009
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As I silently succumb into your wicked, vile snare; I, once again become your pathetic little succubus. Too infirm to make her own decisions. Not yet unique enough to even think. The corrupt esence of this twisted sensation of what you call "love", overcome by, tormenting words and repulsive actions. Slowly, I deplete myself. From you, from this world, from my thoughts. What an abomination I've become! It's my fault! It's all MY fault!! I've allowed you to do this. Decieved by this putrid delusion selfishly called "love". Invariably telling me, "I love you, You'll have me forever, You can't leave now"...





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Perfectionist47 said...
Feb. 18, 2009 at 11:38 pm
This is really really powerful. I don't think it was exactly written in the normal poetry style, but your purpose and message was definitely there. I look forward to seeing more of your work. Check out my poem at-TeenInk.com/raw/Poetry/article/83793/To-Become/ Please leave comments! Thanks for sharing your work.
 
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