Can't See Me

January 31, 2009
By lonelylover SILVER, Abilene, Texas
lonelylover SILVER, Abilene, Texas
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Does anyone understand
Does anyone care
Does anyone see my hand
This pain is hard to bare

Someone help me, save my life
I'm falling faster and faster
Someone take away the knife
Before it ends my life

Another day goes by, still no one sees
Nobody can see whats inside of me
Does anyone see my hand
This pain I cannot stand

Somone help me, save my life
Im falling faster and faster tonight
I think I'm about to take flight
Is this the end of my life

Nobody could understand
Nobody knew how to care
Nobody saw my hand
Or the pain that was hard to bare


The author's comments:
This was something that I wrote for all the people at my school who I see struggling between life and death.

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on Feb. 19 2009 at 5:08 pm
wow. That is a great poem. I can totally relate to the words, and the emotions behind them. Well done.




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