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January 31, 2009
By Jessicka BRONZE, Bradenton, Florida
Jessicka BRONZE, Bradenton, Florida
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The strange giggles coming from this child, should have told me something
He was not an ordinary baby
Yet I was deceived by his chubby cheeks and pouty lips
With his guiltless smile and humongous eyes
The small toddler lured me in

I should have known this infant was different
In his hands he held toys that were familiar, yet strange for a child to have
He pointed them at me and squinted an eye
How silly he looked, adorable too

With the snap of his hand, a part of his toy came flying towards me
And with unbelievable precision it pierced my heart
Unable to think unable to act
I felt myself begin to transform

The baby's toy became a part of me
And I became a foolish being without any senses


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on Nov. 27 2009 at 10:55 am
Vylet.Mxoxoxo, Watford, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"Love is patient, Love is kind"

This is very impressive, l love the conclusion. :)x

on Nov. 5 2009 at 1:28 pm
LeilaniLives PLATINUM, Fort Wayne, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
"They say 'Life's two steps forward and one step back' - But what if I tripped and fell down the whole flight of stairs?"

Beautiful. The word choice could have been better, but overall I liked the tone.

on Sep. 22 2009 at 6:13 pm
Jessicka BRONZE, Bradenton, Florida
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=) thank you so much

on Aug. 20 2009 at 10:54 pm
RachelEliza PLATINUM, Virginia Beach, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
I believe that everything happens for a reason. People change so that you can learn to let go, things go wrong so that you appreciate them when theyre right, and sometimes good things fall apart so that better things can fall together -Marilyn Monroe

hey you asked me to read your work...and i really liked this pice:) a few healthy comments tho...

humongous: i really think a better, softer word should be used. and the last one is the end. but its really goood 4 outta 5 definately.


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