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The strange giggles coming from this child, should have told me something
He was not an ordinary baby
Yet I was deceived by his chubby cheeks and pouty lips
With his guiltless smile and humongous eyes
The small toddler lured me in

I should have known this infant was different
In his hands he held toys that were familiar, yet strange for a child to have
He pointed them at me and squinted an eye
How silly he looked, adorable too

With the snap of his hand, a part of his toy came flying towards me
And with unbelievable precision it pierced my heart
Unable to think unable to act
I felt myself begin to transform

The baby's toy became a part of me
And I became a foolish being without any senses



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Vylet.Mxoxoxo said...
Nov. 27, 2009 at 10:55 am:
This is very impressive, l love the conclusion. :)x
 
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LeilaniLives said...
Nov. 5, 2009 at 1:28 pm:
Beautiful. The word choice could have been better, but overall I liked the tone.
 
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raychull1513This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Aug. 20, 2009 at 10:54 pm:
hey you asked me to read your work...and i really liked this pice:) a few healthy comments tho...
humongous: i really think a better, softer word should be used. and the last one is the end. but its really goood 4 outta 5 definately.
 
Jessicka replied...
Sept. 22, 2009 at 6:13 pm :
=) thank you so much
 
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