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The sorrow and contempt that has coexisted with my being
has clouded my life so as I can no longer see the joy.
My past and present are plagued by this fog of hate and deception.
The dim light of a future, of what could be,
is just barely visible through the smoke and ruin.
Only I can escape the fate that life has so undeniably given me.
Only I can create a new future.




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sissykat said...
Apr. 18, 2009 at 6:56 pm:
this is very well written. i like it alot. I think you are very deep. I was wondering... matbe you could look AT some of my poems as well. please comment.
 
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Zach W. said...
Apr. 4, 2009 at 4:44 am:
Hey....You commented on some poetry I wrote. Thanks for the honest advice. Waiting for one comment on somthin I've written for months now. You're writing, by the way is very good. Kinda like the alter-ego of mine. Just to let you know, by the sound of your comment you assumed I'm depressed. I'm not. It's weird....I can only write about sad things. Everything else comes out like trash when I finish it.
 
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joker G said...
Feb. 25, 2009 at 8:29 pm:
its good
 
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