Colorado

January 31, 2009
By Kaygirl SILVER, Jasper, Georgia
Kaygirl SILVER, Jasper, Georgia
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You told me you were moving
to a place far away, I acted like I didn't care but what I didn't say, is that it is your eyes that take my fear away. You shrugged when I asked you why, laughed because I was scared, but when everything is nothing remember who still cared.


The author's comments:
This is dedicated to a boy who told me he was moving to colorado, little does he know....I still love him.

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Kaygirl SILVER said...
on Feb. 22 2009 at 5:49 pm
Kaygirl SILVER, Jasper, Georgia
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Thanx for people who are commenting I need feedback to know if I should persue poetry or not.



*Kaylee*

clyn12 GOLD said...
on Feb. 21 2009 at 2:47 pm
clyn12 GOLD, Troy, Michigan
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It rhymes but you need to seperate it into lines. Its short and doesn't have an evident rhyme scheme. I would give it...a 6/10.

on Feb. 17 2009 at 2:48 pm
I love it kaylee ~ J.R ~




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