Judgement Night

February 2, 2009
By Ashmunch GOLD, Marshfield, Wisconsin
Ashmunch GOLD, Marshfield, Wisconsin
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That special
That cold
That marvelous night

That night I drove to Rapids
Corner of fifth and Lincon
To the club that resides there

A few bands playing that night
Entertainment for all to see
But I was there to judge
One particular band

Cool band
Hard band
Rock band

Four guys all sixteen
Seth, Dallin, Jeremy

Jack the drummer
Cool drummer
Ape drummer
Cute drummer

He the reason I was there
The reason I wouldn't complain
Even if I was shivering
From my music note necklace
To my purple painted toes

He's who I was judging
But most of all
The one thing I wanted to see for


Ranked high in all rounds
-loved music like I
-real gentlemen too
Looks even got a 10!
Perfect guy to me

The band was good(what I herd)
My mind was on him
Wishing he thought of me as I of him

Everyone enjoying themselves
Moshing and head banging
I tried too
But red hair caught in pink lip gloss

Dad got tired
Of sighs and daydreaming
Snuck outside and around the back

I reluctantly said goodbye
To Jack
Shaking his hand
Welcoming the wormth of him
Nice change against harsh bitter cold

We left (sigh)
With me talking like a cheetah running

Was beyond exhausted
But pumped full of adrenalin

Before I slept
Underneath the sparkling night
I wish upon a star
That one day
Just one day
I'd find myself
Friends with that guy
That perfect guy to me

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Ashmunch GOLD said...
on Mar. 6 2009 at 2:19 am
Ashmunch GOLD, Marshfield, Wisconsin
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This poem I wrote for a school project. The night I talk about actually happened and the guy is real. He is an awesome guy and is a great musician, even though he drums like a monkey. LOL! Hope you enjoy and tell me what you think! Thank you for reading.

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