To Become...

February 2, 2009
To Become

My wings take me higher and higher,
I'm flying, no longer limited to the coarse ground.
Now I'm soaring through the open sky above me,
the anticipation growing with each beat of my heart.

Suddenly I'm close,
close enough to hear it;
the sound of thundering swirls of boiling flames,
pound to my ears.

I'm closer still-
close enough to smell it,
the smell of the molten air, the oxygen seems to be burning in my lungs,
and I feel like I can't breathe, but it's worth it

I finally close in on it,
I can see it now,
the round sphere of light twirls around me,
enveloping me in it's power

I'm so close now I have the illusion of being the sun,
My fingers stretch out around me, and my hands cup the fire,
Oh! I gasp,
It does not burn, if feels cool against my skin...

like holding a-
moonbeam, or a-
shadow, or an-
ocean wave,

It is something so mystical and glorious,
always changing and yet, still the same sun,
and I gasp out a wild breath-
shut my eyes-

and let myself become-
the Sun

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mandygale77 said...
Sept. 23, 2009 at 6:05 pm
Beautiful! I love the last line especially, about the Sun.
smmrox said...
Mar. 19, 2009 at 4:01 pm
This is so awesome! it seems so real, like if you were really there, and in some way it seems inspirational like if your trying to say that you can do anything you want to if you can.
MissusE said...
Feb. 23, 2009 at 2:25 pm
I like how you created the feeling of power and energy by using the symbol of the sun. Keep writing.
ChildOfGod said...
Feb. 21, 2009 at 3:56 pm
Your work was very interesting and it made me stop and think.
Thanks, i looove poetry.
Up there was the link to my work.
Thanks Stella!
hanna said...
Feb. 20, 2009 at 3:54 pm
very moving!
susanits4u said...
Feb. 20, 2009 at 2:36 am
Great writing! You have a vivid imagination!
E-Dawg Jones said...
Feb. 19, 2009 at 11:04 pm
This poem was very good. I thoroughly was entertained by it. Keep Writing!
jellyinthesky said...
Feb. 19, 2009 at 7:26 am
i love the metaphoric possibilities of this. good job.
beckergrl12 said...
Feb. 18, 2009 at 11:23 pm
wow! that was have a great imagination..your poem is very inspiring!!
DJC said...
Feb. 18, 2009 at 5:47 pm
I really like this poem. It makes me think of a number of possibilities, and the imagery was wonderful!
unknown ninja said...
Feb. 18, 2009 at 1:54 am
very creative and well written
Joey Ann said...
Feb. 18, 2009 at 1:01 am
I love your poem - very descriptive and nicely written. Keep writing!
SuperAuntie said...
Feb. 18, 2009 at 12:51 am
Fabulous! So imaginative with such vivid vocabulary, it really pulls the reader into your poem. I hope to read more soon Estelle.
alto_power said...
Feb. 17, 2009 at 11:53 pm
Wow this is really great! it's really creative :)
thatguy26 said...
Feb. 17, 2009 at 9:05 pm
this is a very nice poem. i like its creativeness and style. it is thought-provoking and well written.
Shakira said...
Feb. 17, 2009 at 2:03 pm
I loved this poem!!! I just want to read it over and over again!!!! I can't wait till I can read more of your work!!!! 5 STARS!!!!!!!!!
Perfectionist47 said...
Feb. 17, 2009 at 1:57 pm
Stella that poem was AMMMMAZZZZINNNNGGGG! I had no idea you were such a good writer! I hope you make it into the magazine!
Ruthie95 said...
Feb. 17, 2009 at 3:18 am
This poem was so beautiful! I had no idea what it was about until the very end, but to me that is what a good poem is about.
Carolyn S. said...
Feb. 17, 2009 at 3:04 am
Wow, this is great! I love the structure and the vivid imagery.
Keep writing!
luvmakestheworldgoround8 said...
Feb. 17, 2009 at 1:17 am
Good job getting into TeenInk Raw! I hope you can get into a magazine sometime... Good Luck!
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