IF you only knew

February 2, 2009
By 3ri B BRONZE, Brooklyn, New York
3ri B BRONZE, Brooklyn, New York
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if you only knew
if you only knew how i cry every night
well its mi fault for placing u on a pedastool
it was mi fault for caring about u
it was mi fault for not allowing you t spend time with your dudes all the time
it was my fault for keeping myself back for you
but now what?
you have feelings for me?
then y r u wit someone?
why dou care about hu i like?
why do you care when boyz are around me?
why do you care when i'm jus going out wit anotha boy.
at least it's one boy and i took mi time
you neva did...a week lata and u moved on 2 a 3rd gurl
you're a lier
you're a fool
now you feel it
even though YOU THINK we're cool
people see it even your gurl
she still believes that i'm a threat
now you think tht later on we'll get baq togetha
well i don't know---
i know the knew trend is "go green"
but i dont use recycables...
i recycle bottles and cans not boyz....
so stay there now and destroy you life

at least i know it aint mine

The author's comments:
this is based on something i been and still goin through....the poem is from the heart and is not intended to be rhyming or anythin...it's jus me bein deep and clearin mi head........

-L-O- V- 3ri

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3ri B BRONZE said...
on Feb. 17 2009 at 4:41 pm
3ri B BRONZE, Brooklyn, New York
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omg...i wuz maddd....hey ppls check out this poem:

this goes out to all those that are being pressured and those that are above the influence:



I am me whether u like it or not

I don't care what's cool

I don't care what's hot

I won't destroy my life to listen to u

Lie all the time

Hiding the truth

I won't let myself get into ur grasp

To make me ur minion

One that won't last

I'll keep myself above this idiotic thing

Drugs, alchohol

That's all u sing

But since u can voice

What you think is best

I've made a choice

Well u know the rest

'Cause while u make me an outcast

From ur 'friends'


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