Giving In

January 29, 2009
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Not caring, what is not caring?
It's when he hits you , tells you nothing matters
It's when he lies, cheats, steels
Thinking life is a joke
It's when he forgets that he is a father, when he never fights back
He sits there drinking and yeling; not knowing what he is loosing
Walking, walking here I am, looking back at what has been
I lost a father, I lost a friend
That's what happens when you always give in.

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lovehate29 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 25, 2009 at 4:59 pm
I'm sorry about your father. I feel I could relate. My father hasn't been a real father at all to me or my siblings. This is very good though. I like the emotions put into this.

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