January 22, 2009
By , Grizzly Flats, CA
Trouble comes early and takes you down with no regret.
Breath in, breath out the storm still hits…
Limp, tired, fearless
Your job is useless now.
Earth, wind, and fire
Bread, blood, and wine
The cross He was upon still stands in the hearts of those that believe.
Our tears come together,
Voices lifted,
Souls protected; away from evil
You, me, them…
What will it take for us to work as one while the tears start drying out?
Or will we still be useless and alone lying on the ground?

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mg4JC said...
Feb. 9, 2009 at 12:32 am
Hey little sister you've got a timely message in your poem. We're living in troubled times and the enemy will try to make us feel it's useless... to live right but that's a lie! You're right we can come together at the foot of the cross!
gnelson said...
Feb. 7, 2009 at 5:03 pm
Great job. I like how you spin you phrases. Want to hear more!
skater63 said...
Feb. 7, 2009 at 4:55 pm
nice it was great keep going hopefuly a publish will come soon you did awesome luv bro
Coolbreeze said...
Feb. 7, 2009 at 3:43 pm
Great Article my niece. It makes you think!
Kizzy said...
Feb. 6, 2009 at 7:08 pm
Awesome poem I Love It! The way it makes you think about things and how people can relate in obstacles. Great Job much Luv SiS!
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