Dance till the end

June 18, 2015
By Sunshine2420 SILVER, Unknown, Other
Sunshine2420 SILVER, Unknown, Other
9 articles 0 photos 173 comments

Favorite Quote:
A smile hides everything.


In the beginning of the song

When it was slow

I still danced along

I went with the flow

The drumbeats that I heard later

Made me go faster

The song got even better

Like a growing aster

I tapped my feet to the beat

My hands moving along

The music that my ears would eat

My mind drenched with the song

I took two steps forward

And then spinned around

By the rhythm I was showered

Enchanted by the sound

Silence is my foe

And music, my friend

I danced till the dawn 

I danced till the end


The author's comments:

I went to my friend's party yesterday and the cheerful and electric atmosphere there , made me write this poem  :)


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on Sep. 17 2015 at 8:19 am
Sunshine2420 SILVER, Unknown, Other
9 articles 0 photos 173 comments

Favorite Quote:
A smile hides everything.

Sure and thanks for the comment :)

on Sep. 17 2015 at 8:18 am
Sunshine2420 SILVER, Unknown, Other
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Favorite Quote:
A smile hides everything.

I meant *it lol

HammadWaseem said...
on Sep. 13 2015 at 10:19 am
HammadWaseem, Lahore, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Be proud of who you are.
-Eminem

You can't see me
-John Cena

Ooh, somebody stop me!
-Mask

Thats beautiful! @Sunshine2420 will you rate and comment on my teen ink video work named,"The Unbeatable Breakdancer"?

on Jun. 22 2015 at 11:46 pm
Sunshine2420 SILVER, Unknown, Other
9 articles 0 photos 173 comments

Favorite Quote:
A smile hides everything.

Thanks a lot :) I appreciate it.

on Jun. 22 2015 at 11:45 pm
Sunshine2420 SILVER, Unknown, Other
9 articles 0 photos 173 comments

Favorite Quote:
A smile hides everything.

I'm glad you liked you...thank you!

Hanban12 ELITE said...
on Jun. 22 2015 at 4:35 pm
Hanban12 ELITE, Lake Worth, Florida
133 articles 7 photos 633 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you have built castles in the air, your work need not be lost; that is where they should be. Now put foundations under them."
Henry David Thoreau

"I fell in love the way you fall asleep; slowly, and then all at once."
John Green

Congrats getting the Editor's Choice! I really like the concept of this poem, as well as the way you got the inspiration for it. I feel like the rhyme scheme made the poem flow well, but my favorite part was definitely the last few lines. Keep writing :)

on Jun. 22 2015 at 2:47 pm
Camomile_Addison, Non, California
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Fantastic job!

on Jun. 22 2015 at 12:09 pm
Sunshine2420 SILVER, Unknown, Other
9 articles 0 photos 173 comments

Favorite Quote:
A smile hides everything.

Thank you so so sooo much :)

on Jun. 22 2015 at 12:07 pm
Sunshine2420 SILVER, Unknown, Other
9 articles 0 photos 173 comments

Favorite Quote:
A smile hides everything.

Thank you for your suggestion...well, I really agree :)

Adia16 GOLD said...
on Jun. 22 2015 at 12:05 pm
Adia16 GOLD, Nampa, Idaho
16 articles 7 photos 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Sing like no one's listening, Dance like no ones watching, Love like you've never been hurt."-Unknown

Your Amazing! Great job! If I may offer a tip, your writing is so amazing the wording is exceptional. Except the line "The drum beats that I heard later." Maybe reword this so it doesn't stick out as much.

on Jun. 22 2015 at 12:01 pm
HayatC. PLATINUM, Louisville, Kentucky
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Favorite Quote:
"Do not pray for an easy life, pray for the strength to endure a difficult one."

This is a great piece that could be interpreted in a lot of different ways, I can see why it got Editor's Pick. Great writing!




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