The Dream

January 21, 2009
By Shawn Delegal, Jacksonville, FL

Whisper in the yard and turn the trees all into toys
Lay there on the ground, and turn the dirt into your joy
From what I see and what I know, it's all been boring lately
So I suggest we trade a question mark in for a maybe
Time your riddles right, and make a point that has no sense
Make sure that you're smiling, and the money's been well spent
Innocence and ignorance, it all goes hand in hand
I'm not sure that I'm right, but I hope you'll understand
I hope that you're still searching for the start that has no end
And all the plastic people have now become your friends
Before you start to drift and your soul begins to scream
I just wanted to tell you that you're listening to a dream

The author's comments:
I had to write a poem for an assignment, and when i turned it in, the teacher asked me to come over and told me i should enter it into a contest.

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This article has 3 comments.

on Feb. 12 2009 at 2:31 pm
i absolutely loved it!! i told you, you were a good writer. you are so talented shawn. keep up the awesome work =)

love you =D

yoola said...
on Feb. 11 2009 at 4:18 pm
A great poem! Really shows a lot of thought and is articulated well. Would love to see more!

on Feb. 11 2009 at 4:03 pm
i thought this was a very deep poem... absolutely loved it one of the best that i have seen on here =) keep up the work

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